Son, personally I think this piece of your writing is a good one. 

But frankly speaking, I don't think it will win out in the school's writing competition, as what you have written here is clearly not something the school would like to hear, haha...

Anyway, good try !

Piano Songs - 41

Nostalgy  (Richard Clayderman)

Sonatina  Op.20, No.2   (FR. Kuhlau)  Part 2

Nocturne  Op.55, No.1   (F. Chopin, Op.55, No.1)